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This page is a working area to create a mission statement for our efforts for the upcoming year.  Please chime in.
 
This page is a working area to create a mission statement for our efforts for the upcoming year.  Please chime in.
 
   
 
   
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A possible mission statement spoken at the telecon: "define a set of options for what a decadal survey scope would be"  ...  would this be a correct rephrasing of that idea: "define a set of possible options regarding the scope for a decadal survey"?
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As other reports seem to define scope via a list of statements of task, perhaps "define a set of possible statements of task regarding the scope for a decadal survey".
  
A possible mission statement spoken at the telecon: "define a set of options for what a decadal survey scope would be"  ...  would this be a correct rephrasing of that idea: "define a set of possible options regarding the scope for a decadal survey"?
 
  
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Rama's comment: How about "Assess need for a data decadal survey and develop a set of possible statements of task defining its scope".
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From Chris, how about (building on Rama's): "Outline/Describe <strike>Assess</Strike> the need for a data decadal survey (Survey), develop a set of <Strike>possible</Strike> statements of task defining its scope, and assess potential Survey constituencies.".
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From Anne, From Chris, how about (building on Rama's): "Outline/Describe <strike>Assess</Strike> the need for a data decadal survey (Survey), develop a set of <Strike>possible</Strike> options defining its scope, and assess potential Survey constituencies.".
  
As other reports seem to define scope via a list of statements of task, perhaps "define a set of possible statements of task regarding the scope for a decadal survey".
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Clean, current working version: "Outline the need for a data decadal Survey, develop a set of options defining its scope, and assess potential Survey constituencies."

Latest revision as of 17:59, March 21, 2013

This page is a working area to create a mission statement for our efforts for the upcoming year. Please chime in.

A possible mission statement spoken at the telecon: "define a set of options for what a decadal survey scope would be" ... would this be a correct rephrasing of that idea: "define a set of possible options regarding the scope for a decadal survey"?

As other reports seem to define scope via a list of statements of task, perhaps "define a set of possible statements of task regarding the scope for a decadal survey".


Rama's comment: How about "Assess need for a data decadal survey and develop a set of possible statements of task defining its scope".

From Chris, how about (building on Rama's): "Outline/Describe Assess the need for a data decadal survey (Survey), develop a set of possible statements of task defining its scope, and assess potential Survey constituencies.".

From Anne, From Chris, how about (building on Rama's): "Outline/Describe Assess the need for a data decadal survey (Survey), develop a set of possible options defining its scope, and assess potential Survey constituencies.".

Clean, current working version: "Outline the need for a data decadal Survey, develop a set of options defining its scope, and assess potential Survey constituencies."